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My new site on Mon May 29, 2006 6:18 pm

### Salem

Joined: 26 May 2006
Posts: 32

This is my very new site that I made just yesterday, Please rate it and tell me how I can improve it. Thanks! -Salem
http://www.freewebs.com/salemdaykor/index.htm

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Posted on Mon May 29, 2006 6:43 pm

### Etree8

Joined: 16 Jan 2006
Posts: 340

I think you should add some sections on energy manipulation. I also hope you realize that "biokinesis" is a political term. The word you want is DMILS. It stands for Direct Mental Interaction with Living Systems. Aside from that, it looks great!

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Posted on Mon May 29, 2006 8:09 pm

### Apollo

Joined: 17 Jan 2006
Posts: 1589

not very much info. You have one page of info and 2 links (one to Dewarlorx and one to psipog). What are you looking for your site to do? Pretty much what you are telling your viewers is "dont come to my site, go to those". You need information that is worthwhile of the viewer to come to your site. I suggest that you also run the typing that you do have through a spell checker.
Nothing above was meant to be rude. Just honest constructive critisism.

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Posted on Mon May 29, 2006 8:19 pm

### evlmonky

Joined: 02 Feb 2006
Posts: 156

Etree8 wrote:
I think you should add some sections on energy manipulation. I also hope you realize that "biokinesis" is a political term. The word you want is DMILS. It stands for Direct Mental Interaction with Living Systems. Aside from that, it looks great!

From what I know people should be able to call stuff whatever they want its not like you have no clue what he is talking about plus using DMILS instead of biokenisis is just a cheap trick to make you look more mature and real

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Posted on Mon May 29, 2006 10:05 pm

### Etree8

Joined: 16 Jan 2006
Posts: 340

evlmonky wrote:
From what I know people should be able to call stuff whatever they want its not like you have no clue what he is talking about plus using DMILS instead of biokenisis is just a cheap trick to make you look more mature and real

Agreed, but I thought he should know that it IS a political term, not a psionic skill.

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Posted on Mon May 29, 2006 10:32 pm

### Salem

Joined: 26 May 2006
Posts: 32

Thank ya'll for the critisim. Remimber I made that yesterday, I'm trying to improve it as we speak.

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